Wednesday, 03 December 2008

  • a good poem repost dug from a friend's acct..

    …bordering inappropriate…


    i was blessed with a very sweet and lovely sun,
        but instead of thanking her for the day that was,
    and continued to look forward
         and grow..

    i chose to tell tales of if’s and but’s,
        that angered and offended her
    ever pure and chaste heart.


        and my once
    immaculate intentions
        are now tinged and
    cloaked with guilt and shame.


        Was it me to be blamed for?


    was it my innocent, mute
        mind? (that now
    shouts for pardoning)


        my lips,
    (that failed to express
        the introvert feelings
    of its Lord heart?)


        my bold tongue,
    (in which gasping for the sincere utterance,
        carelessly hurled
    words of thorns

        that cut thru the delicate

    strings of her true
        but intricate feelings?)


    my thirsty animal being?
        my cold corpse,
    (which longs for life,
        for the heat  of her warm love..)


    my sinful limbs
        (which tried not to
    defile her sacred earthness,


        but to warm her
    from the solitude chill;


        and to protect
    and keep her in my wings.)


    would you not offer me
        your arms anymore?
    if I ask you to fly with
        me during the night?


    are you now deaf to
        your seraph’s call ?


    do you not love
        your man anymore?


    -sleepless anonymous




    (this is one of the good old memories of how i won her back during one of our major cool-offs, by writing this poem.and i pretty much doubt if it would be effective this time..though hope is still there..maybe i'd try reliving the extrovertness-in-pen of myself so i'd feel a lil bit of fulfillment in this tiny blogs)


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